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Lightning In The Night


                                             Sky-to-land flashes,
                             Bright boughs clawing through blackness,
                                         Nude tree dives headfirst.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/7/2019 11:51:00 PM
Nude tree dives headfirst/// superb expression
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Bernard Chan
Date: 5/8/2019 7:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Mahtab.
Date: 11/10/2018 10:43:00 AM
Your brilliant haiku is boldly enlivened by dynamic and dramatic imagery, Bernard. A sensory feast! Warmest wishes.. ~ Susan
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Bernard Chan
Date: 11/11/2018 4:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan!
Date: 10/26/2018 9:33:00 PM
Brilliant haiku, Bernard. Wonderful action and strong imagery, Very unique! ~Warren
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Bernard Chan
Date: 10/27/2018 5:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, Warren!
Date: 10/22/2018 10:57:00 AM
Wow! Love the ending! Great imagery and action! Fave, Bernard!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 10/22/2018 5:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim, for your visit and lovely comment. I feel honored. Much appreciated!
Date: 10/22/2018 8:30:00 AM
Fantastic imagery! A really cool haiku :) xomo
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Bernard Chan
Date: 10/22/2018 5:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen :)