Lightning In the Night

Sky-to-land flashes, Bright boughs clawing through blackness, Nude tree dives headfirst.

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 5/7/2019 11:51:00 PM

Nude tree dives headfirst/// superb expression

Bernard Chan
Date: 5/8/2019 7:43:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Mahtab.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/10/2018 10:43:00 AM

Your brilliant haiku is boldly enlivened by dynamic and dramatic imagery, Bernard. A sensory feast! Warmest wishes.. ~ Susan

Bernard Chan
Date: 11/11/2018 4:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, Susan!

Warren Doll

Date: 10/26/2018 9:33:00 PM

Brilliant haiku, Bernard. Wonderful action and strong imagery, Very unique! ~Warren

Bernard Chan
Date: 10/27/2018 5:41:00 AM

Thank you very much, Warren!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/22/2018 10:57:00 AM

Wow! Love the ending! Great imagery and action! Fave, Bernard!

Bernard Chan
Date: 10/22/2018 5:56:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kim, for your visit and lovely comment. I feel honored. Much appreciated!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/22/2018 8:30:00 AM

Fantastic imagery! A really cool haiku :) xomo

Bernard Chan
Date: 10/22/2018 5:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen :)