Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Lightning Fissure

thunder sound dashes
                                         lightning fissure quickly dips 
                                            jig jag cross lines' flash

                                               starts rainy music
                                         with hissing crescendo to
                                                    diminuendo

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Judy Konos April 19, 2015 at 6:26 PM lI agree with Jan ..wonderful... Bl Devnath April 21, 2015 at 10:17 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your wonderful comment.Loved always,bl

Jan Allison April 18, 2015 at 2:34 PM wonderful imagery so few words say so much! Hugs jan xx 7 xxx Bl Devnath April 18, 2015 at 2:37 PM Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your wonderful comment and for your 7. Loved always,bl