Lightning

Traveller of clouds You live in but an instant In the Autumn storms

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Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/31/2011 8:37:00 AM

Rauwolfia clever halku poem , but we had a spring storm yesterday that you thought the world was ending. Anne

Skat A

Date: 7/13/2010 6:02:00 PM

gOOD iMAGERY, eNJOYED yOUR WRiTE- SKAT

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/12/2010 10:52:00 AM

Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.

Timothy Brumley

Date: 7/10/2010 8:48:00 AM

Getting better and better! Now make me proud! I should say, prouder!

Anthony Beesley

Date: 7/8/2010 9:55:00 AM

HOW IS 3 LINES OF QUICK BLASTS AND BURSTS CONSIDERED POETRY? THAT IS ONLY THE VERY BEGINNING MY FRIEND. BLOW THE DUST OFF THE PAD PULL THE PEN OUT OF YOUR POCKET AND FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED IF SEX WAS THAT BRIEF I'D TURN INTO A GENOCIDAL DEMIGOD AND START A NUCLEAR WAR OF WORDS BUT OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS GENIUS

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2010 6:24:00 AM

well penned haiku with nice images

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2010 4:27:00 AM

Great descriptive Haiku...Just like being there..Sara