Lightning

Traveller of clouds
You live in but an instant
In the Autumn storms

natureautumnhaiku

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Anne Rutherford

May 31, 2011 at 8:37 AM

Rauwolfia clever halku poem , but we had a spring storm yesterday that you thought the world was ending. Anne

Skat A

July 13, 2010 at 6:02 PM

gOOD iMAGERY, eNJOYED yOUR WRiTE- SKAT

Diiamond Rich

July 12, 2010 at 10:52 AM

Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.

Timothy Brumley

July 10, 2010 at 8:48 AM

Getting better and better! Now make me proud! I should say, prouder!

Anthony Beesley

July 8, 2010 at 9:55 AM

HOW IS 3 LINES OF QUICK BLASTS AND BURSTS CONSIDERED POETRY? THAT IS ONLY THE VERY BEGINNING MY FRIEND. BLOW THE DUST OFF THE PAD PULL THE PEN OUT OF YOUR POCKET AND FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED IF SEX WAS THAT BRIEF I'D TURN INTO A GENOCIDAL DEMIGOD AND START A NUCLEAR WAR OF WORDS BUT OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS GENIUS