Lightning

Nature's fireworks
crackling, popping, flashing light
boom of thunder heard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 7, 2010 at 6:22 PM
I agree with Karen. The imagery stands out and describes lightning's appearance and sound very well! Great haiku, Amy. Love, Carolyn
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May 7, 2010 at 5:44 PM
Good use of sound imagery. I like the active nature of this poem. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keep on writing! Karen
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