Lightning

i sit upon a majestic horse
a skittish cowgirl
i am for a day

dog keeps watch
drives me into bear country
i hold tight the reins

until my knuckles are white
then red then I laugh
at how silly i feel

for high atop Lightning
i release myself
to almighty God

loosen the reins
He has my back
and my saddle’s lighter

and Lightning snickers
at the cowgirl wannabee
but relaxes just the same

7/2/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Laurie Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Hello Kim … it appears that Lightning looked after you Kim - or should I write cowgirl - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 9:18 PM
Thanks, Lindsay! :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 11:16 AM
Fun! :) xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Thank you, Maureen! Hugs...Kim
Man Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Hey Cowgirl.. I loved your Lightning story!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Thanks, Lyric! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 4:56 AM
I was holding my breath at the words bear country.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 5:38 AM
LOL! Something about the Yukon spirit that makes you feel brave.
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