Light-Hearted

Lavender dreams light up my life, as lilac laughter liberates love...
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Deschler Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 5:02 PM
Loved the pretty floral imagery in this and the peaceful feeling it gives the reader... Beautifully penned, Joanna :)
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 2:03 PM
- Congratulations on your first place in the contest, Jo :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Ashley Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 5:26 PM
Oh your monoku is just beautiful, Joanna! Lovely alliteration and emotion. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Poetry Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 11:26 PM
Poetically divine. Congrats on the win :)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 12:35 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win with your lovely write. I enjoyed reading your "Light-Hearted" again. Have a blessed/great day writing away.....
One Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 11:38 AM
Lovely poem, light-hearted is one one word, almost... Congratulations on your placement.
Balasubramanian Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 7:02 PM
This is so beautiful. So happy to hear from you. I am fine. How are you?
Daniel Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 10:19 PM
Hi Rama, I am doing fine by God's grace:) glad you took time to stop by:) hope you still write.. Long time since you posted anything
May Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 5:52 PM
Wonderful Monoku Jo, best wishes
Goldsmith Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 2:59 PM
A lovely Monoku write. I love anything Lavender. Have a blessed day..........
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 12:40 PM
I love the two colors you chose AND the alliteration so I really love this one liner
Buhagiar Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Wonderful Monoku that deserves high placement in your contest. Not easy to write but you did very well. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 6:35 AM
How beautiful is this monoku! I am in awe of your wordplay! So creative and soulful! I especially love “ lavender dreams light up my life” ah soul warming! And i must say your alliterations are flowing just seamlessly! “ lilac laughter” love ur use of colors! So fitting for the mood! Goodluck for the contest. Im sure it is a top winner
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 5:19 AM
- A beautiful and lovely fragrant poem, Jo :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Sharma  Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 4:57 AM
Wow, this is such a beautiful monoku with gorgeously flowing alliteration throughout! I'm loving your use of colours here "lavender" and "lilac".. So profound and breathtaking.. You've described a very serene ambience here when one is in a light-hearted mood, living life to the fullest and dreams adorn their skies.. Filled with laughter and joy! Truly enjoyed reading this one dear Jo, you're a talented poetess really :)
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