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Lighter Than

lighter than a wisp
afloat on a midnight breeze
delicate whisper



AP: 2nd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Koplin Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 1:01 PM
A very beautiful Haiku!
Gauthier Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 1:36 PM
Thanks, Mark. Much appreciated ~
Krutsinger Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:15 AM
A wispy delicate poem!
Gauthier Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 1:02 PM
Thank you, Caren ~
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 10:46 AM
Beautiful!
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 2:51 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~
Wolf Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 8:46 PM
Lighter than a feather is your velvet touch with this exquisite haiku, Line. It's floating right into my FAVES. Thank you, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 2:51 PM
Thanks for the lovely compliment, Gershon. Most appreciated.
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