Lighter Than

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lighter than a wisp afloat on a midnight breeze delicate whisper AP: 2nd place 2020 Posted on September 25, 2020

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Mark Koplin

Date: 10/24/2020 1:01:00 PM

A very beautiful Haiku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/24/2020 1:36:00 PM

Thanks, Mark. Much appreciated ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/20/2020 7:15:00 AM

A wispy delicate poem!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/20/2020 1:02:00 PM

Thank you, Caren ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2020 10:46:00 AM

Beautiful!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2020 2:51:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/26/2020 8:46:00 PM

Lighter than a feather is your velvet touch with this exquisite haiku, Line. It's floating right into my FAVES. Thank you, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/27/2020 2:51:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely compliment, Gershon. Most appreciated.