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Lightening the Path

Uncharted path leads me to nights cold Till winged breeze chants of hope foretold. .............. 5/2/2019 Crystal Clear Contest of Joseph May Picture 1
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Wolf Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Furtive whispers, so promising!! Delightful, nette. And congrats on your win. ~ Gershon
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 2:50 PM
Awesome message in your poem, Nette. Congrats on the win.
Deschler Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Yes, the night can bring darkness, but the dawn always follows along with a whole new light ... I like the positive message that flows out of this poem. Nicely penned Nette :)
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 12:48 PM
- Congratulations on your excellent winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 10:08 AM
Lovely write Nette...Congrats on your win..
Krutsinger Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 3:47 AM
Beautifully done; good luck in the contest. Perfect photo for your poem, my friend.
Callus Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 1:59 PM
Uncharted paths that lead to hope are not to be feared! You put faith and hope in your readers through these two lines, Nette! Hugs // paul
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May 3, 2019 at 8:21 AM
A butterfly worthy breeze. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.
Rose  Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 6:26 AM
I think your poems are like chants don't you ? Have a wonderful day dear Nette, love xo
Michael Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 3:38 AM
"Hope foretold" I like that...
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