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Uncharted path leads me to nights cold Till winged breeze chants of hope foretold. .............. 5/2/2019 Crystal Clear Contest of Joseph May Picture 1

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Date: 5/14/2019 8:19:00 PM
Furtive whispers, so promising!! Delightful, nette. And congrats on your win. ~ Gershon
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Date: 5/11/2019 2:50:00 PM
Awesome message in your poem, Nette. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 5/7/2019 9:55:00 PM
Yes, the night can bring darkness, but the dawn always follows along with a whole new light ... I like the positive message that flows out of this poem. Nicely penned Nette :)
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Date: 5/5/2019 12:48:00 PM
- Congratulations on your excellent winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/5/2019 10:08:00 AM
Lovely write Nette...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 5/4/2019 3:47:00 AM
Beautifully done; good luck in the contest. Perfect photo for your poem, my friend.
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Date: 5/3/2019 1:59:00 PM
Uncharted paths that lead to hope are not to be feared! You put faith and hope in your readers through these two lines, Nette! Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/3/2019 8:21:00 AM
A butterfly worthy breeze. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 5/3/2019 6:26:00 AM
I think your poems are like chants don't you ? Have a wonderful day dear Nette, love xo
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Date: 5/3/2019 3:38:00 AM
"Hope foretold" I like that...
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