Lighten My Path ( Double Haiku )

pain is taking over 

shades cover my tears .. and now 

light overcomes darkness 


my path is now lit 

my journey through life / will now 

become much brighter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 20, 2009 at 1:22 PM
Nice choka, the second stanza speaks to me...
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