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The extreme fisherman Hangs upside down Delivering snow Traded for straw Confused about its job New planet in the cube Growing twisters Ancient time tools Downward rhymes Falling up high Magnetic ice Draws liquid from your eyes Look up and try Ideas with no sand New state of matter Won’t be there for long If the newcomer glows White heat from the moon Cloning breakfast talk Ticking on the wall Umbrellas on the floor Embrace the flash An throw it all the way back Into the source Click….

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Jay Loveless

Date: 10/19/2009 11:22:00 AM

i dont think anyone understands a damn thing your saying =P....and that just makes it all the better xD haha nice work xo Raiin

Date: 5/30/2009 2:05:00 PM

Interesting perspective here. The vivid images forward your thoughts in a creative way. Keep up the good writing! Karen

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/29/2009 7:48:00 AM

Now this is brilliance, now this is imagination, now this is a poem with a punch ... genius pouring honey from the pen's sacred tip. Love it.

Janice Herzog

Date: 5/22/2009 7:43:00 AM

Dear Cesar: Love your use of expressionism here. Well written! Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad that you liked it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/17/2009 6:58:00 PM

Beautiful! nice job Cesar! - jeremias

Alley Poe

Date: 5/17/2009 6:26:00 PM

"Magnetic ice Draws liquid from your eyes" Absolutely love this!!! -Alley