Lightbulb

The extreme fisherman
Hangs upside down
Delivering snow
Traded for straw
Confused about its job

New planet in the cube
Growing twisters
Ancient time tools
Downward rhymes
Falling up high

Magnetic ice
Draws liquid from your eyes
Look up and try
Ideas with no sand
New state of matter
Won’t be there for long
If the newcomer glows

White heat from the moon
Cloning breakfast talk
Ticking on the wall
Umbrellas on the floor
Embrace the flash
An throw it all the way back
Into the source

Click….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/19/2009 11:22:00 AM
i dont think anyone understands a damn thing your saying =P....and that just makes it all the better xD haha nice work xo Raiin
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Date: 5/30/2009 2:05:00 PM
Interesting perspective here. The vivid images forward your thoughts in a creative way. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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Date: 5/29/2009 7:48:00 AM
Now this is brilliance, now this is imagination, now this is a poem with a punch ... genius pouring honey from the pen's sacred tip. Love it.
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Date: 5/22/2009 7:43:00 AM
Dear Cesar: Love your use of expressionism here. Well written! Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad that you liked it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 5/17/2009 6:58:00 PM
Beautiful! nice job Cesar! - jeremias
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Date: 5/17/2009 6:26:00 PM
"Magnetic ice Draws liquid from your eyes" Absolutely love this!!! -Alley
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