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Light To Guide the Way

True light from within,
Brings echoes of splashing waves.
Guiding them through caves.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 23, 2010 at 6:38 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Guiding Light contest Marty. Love, Carol

John Freeman

April 22, 2010 at 6:21 PM

congratulations Marty on a fine presentation, and wine in Raul's contest. Agape, Moses

Charmaine Chircop

April 22, 2010 at 3:30 PM

An excellent one Marty........Charma

Kim M

April 22, 2010 at 2:04 PM

Clever use of the sense of sound. Echoes in the caves as one is guided out of the darkness is completely sensational. (I can also feel the irritating splatter of water and I can almost smell dankness from your words!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 22, 2010 at 2:01 PM

Congrats Marty on your winning poem in Raul's contest... perfect words for the photo and a sweet win for u from the "Sweetheart"

April 22, 2010 at 1:34 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative perspective. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Keep on writing! Enjoy your success. Karen