Light Show

  Beneath an obsidian sky
 Twinkles of light gleam through the trees
 As fireflies were blinking nearby
 Beneath an obsidian sky
The breeze sways the trees with a sigh
 Fireflies put on a show to please
 Beneath an obsidian sky
 Twinkles of light gleam through the trees 

1-8-2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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January 9, 2026 at 12:58 AM
Delightful triolet. Never wrote one, mainly because it is not easy to use iambic pentameter.
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