Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Light Reveals

A shiny yellow sun reveals through striation
Steel blue clouds layered on the horizon.
Fog~light and airy floats but gives forth revelation
Of the fulness 'pon the trees fruit fit for fall's situation.

Let not my presence which will soon be departed
Leave some of you for a time somewhat brokenhearted 
When truth in your dreams at night reveals 
A sage's gift now disappeared
Don't worry my poetic friend my love for you has no end...

 

I have no idea what this is...
I am going to be away from my 
computer starting on Monday for sure
but just for a short time.
I will miss you my poetic friend..

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Joe Maverick June 6, 2013 at 3:07 PM Such a thoughtful words in this Sara; I think it also has other connotations; causes different thought scenes..(well put come back soon) Joe..

Suzanne Delaney June 1, 2013 at 8:00 PM I hope you won't have to stay away too long. We will miss our poetic friend. Much Aloha SuZ Thanks for stopping by my page. I have been thinking of you.

Jack Horne June 1, 2013 at 4:19 PM lovely write, my friend, and have a wonderful time

Andrea Dietrich June 1, 2013 at 3:31 PM very poetic whether you know what it is or not. hurry back and have fun while you are away!!

Nette Onclaud June 1, 2013 at 12:00 PM when you don't know where things are headed, it's the heart/soul that leads.. a seemingly gentle write so spontaneously written with grace... wonderful job, sara..:) huggs

Karen Anglesey June 1, 2013 at 8:42 AM So eloquently written and deeply heartfelt ...:)

Harry Horsman June 1, 2013 at 7:17 AM With poetry as good as this Sara, you'll never be missed always in our hearts you will stay... hurry back please...

Debbie Guzzi June 1, 2013 at 5:39 AM Verse will be your constant friend USE paper? Light & Love

Russell Sivey May 31, 2013 at 8:26 PM Does this break from the computer have something to do with your husband? I hope everything is alright! Does it have to do with you? I hope everything is ok! Return back soon my friend.

Donna Jones May 31, 2013 at 6:19 PM Sara...this is lovely...true raw emotion...enjoy your break...you are loved back!!!!! I wish you peace on this journey...

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 31, 2013 at 10:38 AM In addition, I like your last line so much. It means a lot. See you soon.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 31, 2013 at 10:34 AM This is a very brilliant way to reveal your physical departure in our midst. I agreed with Rachael, true beauty never departs, it'll remain forever. Hope to see you back soon. I will miss you as well. Well done. AO

Demetrios Trifiatis May 31, 2013 at 10:03 AM Dear Sara, your departure of the poetry scene only sadness in my heart could bring, please come back soon and strong and sing us again your love's song! I WILL MISS YOU! GOD BE WITH YOU!

Russell Sivey May 31, 2013 at 9:24 AM This is a lovely write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem, what a tremendous piece, quite the awesome write! What a delight it was to read this poem, Great Work!!