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Light Reveals

A shiny yellow sun reveals through striation Steel blue clouds layered on the horizon. Fog~light and airy floats but gives forth revelation Of the fulness 'pon the trees fruit fit for fall's situation. Let not my presence which will soon be departed Leave some of you for a time somewhat brokenhearted When truth in your dreams at night reveals A sage's gift now disappeared Don't worry my poetic friend my love for you has no end... I have no idea what this is... I am going to be away from my computer starting on Monday for sure but just for a short time. I will miss you my poetic friend..

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/6/2013 3:07:00 PM

Such a thoughtful words in this Sara; I think it also has other connotations; causes different thought scenes..(well put come back soon) Joe..

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/1/2013 8:00:00 PM

I hope you won't have to stay away too long. We will miss our poetic friend. Much Aloha SuZ Thanks for stopping by my page. I have been thinking of you.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/1/2013 4:19:00 PM

lovely write, my friend, and have a wonderful time

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2013 3:31:00 PM

very poetic whether you know what it is or not. hurry back and have fun while you are away!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2013 12:00:00 PM

when you don't know where things are headed, it's the heart/soul that leads.. a seemingly gentle write so spontaneously written with grace... wonderful job, sara..:) huggs

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/1/2013 8:42:00 AM

So eloquently written and deeply heartfelt ...:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/1/2013 7:17:00 AM

With poetry as good as this Sara, you'll never be missed always in our hearts you will stay... hurry back please...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/1/2013 5:39:00 AM

Verse will be your constant friend USE paper? Light & Love

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/31/2013 8:26:00 PM

Does this break from the computer have something to do with your husband? I hope everything is alright! Does it have to do with you? I hope everything is ok! Return back soon my friend.

Donna Jones

Date: 5/31/2013 6:19:00 PM

Sara...this is lovely...true raw emotion...enjoy your break...you are loved back!!!!! I wish you peace on this journey...

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/31/2013 10:38:00 AM

In addition, I like your last line so much. It means a lot. See you soon.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/31/2013 10:34:00 AM

This is a very brilliant way to reveal your physical departure in our midst. I agreed with Rachael, true beauty never departs, it'll remain forever. Hope to see you back soon. I will miss you as well. Well done. AO

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/31/2013 10:03:00 AM

Dear Sara, your departure of the poetry scene only sadness in my heart could bring, please come back soon and strong and sing us again your love's song! I WILL MISS YOU! GOD BE WITH YOU!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/31/2013 9:24:00 AM

This is a lovely write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem, what a tremendous piece, quite the awesome write! What a delight it was to read this poem, Great Work!!