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I used the word bye as an illustration; you may know in compedative sports if you don't get a match to play, they give you a bye ticket; and you wait till the next time
comes, like God says the rainbow is promise of better to come (Paul speaks of running
a race to God ) also I used the term in-violate as word play on colour and purity..
The attic means our limited heaven/skies; ever means for our understanding of a long time.." Whereas God Is eternal & will change all things when he wills; schism again means a crack if you will.. That gives just a glimpse of the colours of Gods Heaven through those rainbows..!
I thank whoever reads this for taking the time. Yours Joe..)