Light Fading

to see the light fading away
to see the darkness take way
oh the feeling it gives
the adrenaline given
to have the power to take
the power to feel
this feeling is like no other
nor have many others felt it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 4, 2009 at 10:48 AM
Good afternoon Ashley. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Love, Carol
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