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Light Elopement

Sun and moonlight mix. Eloping during twilight. Dusk consumation!

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Date: 3/11/2010 12:16:00 PM

Not what I was expecting from the title. Enjoyed the surprise. Nice use of imagery. I like the playful feel of the second line. Left me smiling. Thank you for sharing this day brightener and for your kind comments. Karen

Skat A

Date: 3/10/2010 4:16:00 PM

This one is what I call awesome .Mixing the sun n the moon. Sounds romantic to me...ENJOYED

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/10/2010 3:06:00 PM

good ideas, enjoyed reading

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 3/10/2010 1:58:00 PM

Have to agree with Carolyns comment here lovely piece Daniel

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2010 1:33:00 PM

Wow! Love the way you put a bit of romance into your description of the heavens, Marty. I'm "consumed" with envy. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2010 12:50:00 PM

Wild thoughts that you have in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing.. Sara