Light Elopement

Sun and moonlight mix.
Eloping during twilight.
Dusk consumation!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 11, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Not what I was expecting from the title. Enjoyed the surprise. Nice use of imagery. I like the playful feel of the second line. Left me smiling. Thank you for sharing this day brightener and for your kind comments. Karen
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March 10, 2010 at 4:16 PM
This one is what I call awesome .Mixing the sun n the moon. Sounds romantic to me...ENJOYED
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March 10, 2010 at 3:06 PM
good ideas, enjoyed reading
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March 10, 2010 at 1:58 PM
Have to agree with Carolyns comment here lovely piece Daniel
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March 10, 2010 at 1:33 PM
Wow! Love the way you put a bit of romance into your description of the heavens, Marty. I'm "consumed" with envy. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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March 10, 2010 at 12:50 PM
Wild thoughts that you have in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing.. Sara
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