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Vanya Evangeline's Poetry Comes In Different Shapes Contest

Light Bulb Of Gadget Bursts

His beat rages for hours darting to the computer table without time to greet Mom or Dad as the light pops every minute; wired in space, lost in blank words when he speaks, enthralled to level up and gain power points because he cares more for video than human talk. The light on the screen aims at Tekken and aliens raging a war against supremacy, somewhere outside the real world he can’t deal with, now. And he puts the light on, enticing him to dim a special nook in a lit, closed room. Kiddie books unread for weeks; a migraine splits past 12 am for a kid of nine years unable to control an impulse. He eats, plays and deals with his robot pals.. . . . . . . . . . . other boys take their bikes out, buts he pushes another button controlled by his mechanical allies with guns ,roars. . . . . . Video wreck, Game
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A  Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 4:33 PM
Nette, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~
Puddifoot Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 4:32 PM
creative format and use of language, as always from you, nette! love "a migraine splits past 12 am" - congrats on your 1st place win! :)
May Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 9:18 AM
Congrats on great win Nette
Mehta Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 9:22 PM
Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, nette
Rodgers Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 8:06 PM
Illuminating - congrats on your win
Guzzi Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 7:38 PM
yup REAL good! [I enjoyed you taking on a new topic ;)} Congrad's on your win
Walker  Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 7:08 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Nette. The poem is well done... Verlena
Richards Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 6:45 PM
It's so true!! It is unfortunately the way of the generations to come, it is frightening to think what the future may hold. Excellent subject and I love the format!! Congratulations, Nette!....
Harper Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 6:27 PM
Awesome poem, Nette, sorry you weren't inspired anew. This offers poem offers a message and a shape. Congratulations on your win!
A   Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Nette, congratulations in RIX's "VIDEO GAME EXTRAVAGANZA" gaming contest.. :-) always~pd
Arowolo Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 4:21 PM
Wonderful shape poem and nice presentation,Nette.....Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest....Kudos to you,great pal...
Sweetheart Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 9:50 PM
CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON THIS COOL AND CLEVER SHAPE..WRITE .. AND WIN .. WOW..
Williams Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 12:51 PM
Nette, big congrats on your win, love the poem and the layout...David
Self Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 12:47 PM
Congrats on your win!
Song Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 10:24 AM
What a sad child u painted in your entry, Nette...unfortunately it is probably not too uncommon a scene...with balance, video games can be a blessing, unfortunately many gamer children get "sucked" into the TV tube escaping the stresses of life...Great compare and contrast at the end...appreciated the somber tone too..CONGRATS, gwendolen
Song Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 10:24 AM
A great FIRST PLACE WIN!!!
Brown Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Video Game" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 10:20 PM
Yeah..I know him!Beautiful poem.
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 3:58 PM
way to do the contest, Nette. So original this is!!! wow, is that a game name video wreck?? I am sure this will score high.
Bauer Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 3:15 PM
wonderful poem and i love the way you've written it! best of luck in the contest...
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 1:34 PM
This speaks much truth..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Reads like winner to me..Good luck in the contest...Thanks for stopping by...Sara
Ellison Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 7:26 AM
Great shape poem nette! Going to save this one... love and hugs, Jack
Dolly Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 11:53 PM
I diiiggg...very creative! Wonder what this boy would do if someone yanked on the power cord. Yikes!!!
Sivey Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 5:10 PM
Wow, Nette, this is a spectacular shape poem my friend! You have mastered the video game geek here! You painted him very nicely, and all his negative aspects of his life! What an expressively wondrous piece, Great Work!!
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