Light and Life

Flickering drama

The candle sighs... Diminished

Time can't hold its breath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 12:28 AM
Such a dramatic, wonderfully written Senryu Chris. Love the choice of your skilfully chosen words. ‘ Time can’t hold its breath’ - what a line! Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend. :):)
Conn Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 10:22 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 5:04 AM
Wow! A powerhouse!
Conn Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 5:37 PM
You're too kind. Thank you.
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