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Light and Hope

The sun lit up the dirt road on a path to somewhere, I don't know It lures me in mysterious ways to look ahead and follow I am not sure there is time to skip It is only a moment, then the sun will sink In the breeze where songs are made I cherish the daylight with time to think Then darkness will be met But the music will be held I choose the song and remember the light will return with hope to weld Heidi Sands 8/30/23

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/4/2023 10:20:00 PM

I like this one, that glimpse of hope makes us go on:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/5/2023 6:01:00 AM

Yes it does. Thank you for your comments. I hope all is well and you have a nice day :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/2/2023 8:07:00 PM

"Light to be cherished," a warm and wonderful thought, Heidi. Thank you!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/3/2023 7:13:00 AM

Thank you very much Gershon and you are welcome. I hope you have a nice day :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/30/2023 11:56:00 AM

Heidi enjoyed reading your marvelous poem. It has a calming essence, capturing the transition as the sun begins its descent, adorned with vivid hues that beckon forth jubilant feelings to revel in the beauty bestowed by nature. A delightful poem

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2023 12:04:00 PM

I appreciate your beautiful comment on this ! Thank you very much :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/30/2023 11:39:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I enjoy the sunsets. they are so beautiful to see. Especially when over the water. That would be two beauties to see. Hugs. /darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2023 11:22:00 AM

Hello Heidi oh I agree. I just love the sunsets. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2023 12:04:00 PM

I enjoy them too and they are very nice at the water with the reflections! Thank you for your comment Darlene . Hugs :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/30/2023 10:59:00 AM

A lovely story. Sunset is a pretty time of the day. Have a wonderful day...............

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2023 11:13:00 AM

Thank you Paula. I hope you have a nice day too :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/30/2023 9:54:00 AM

That moment when the sun is about to dip is adorned in colors--inviting joyous emotions to celebrate nature's gift. Lovely theme my friend--lovely poem, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2023 11:12:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate your input and support, always :)