Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Light and Hope

The sun lit up the dirt road
on a path to somewhere, I don't know
It lures me in mysterious ways
to look ahead and follow

I am not sure there is time to skip
It is only a moment, then the sun will sink
In the breeze where songs are made
I cherish the daylight with time to think

Then darkness will be met
But the music will be held
I choose the song and remember the light
will return with hope to weld

Heidi Sands

8/30/23

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Joanna Daniel September 4, 2023 at 10:20 PM I like this one, that glimpse of hope makes us go on:) Heidi Sands September 5, 2023 at 6:01 AM Yes it does. Thank you for your comments. I hope all is well and you have a nice day :)

Gershon Wolf September 2, 2023 at 8:07 PM "Light to be cherished," a warm and wonderful thought, Heidi. Thank you! Heidi Sands September 3, 2023 at 7:13 AM Thank you very much Gershon and you are welcome. I hope you have a nice day :)

Sotto Poet August 30, 2023 at 11:56 AM Heidi enjoyed reading your marvelous poem. It has a calming essence, capturing the transition as the sun begins its descent, adorned with vivid hues that beckon forth jubilant feelings to revel in the beauty bestowed by nature. A delightful poem Heidi Sands August 30, 2023 at 12:04 PM I appreciate your beautiful comment on this ! Thank you very much :)

Darlene De Beaulieu August 30, 2023 at 11:39 AM Hello Heidi, I enjoy the sunsets. they are so beautiful to see. Especially when over the water. That would be two beauties to see. Hugs. /darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu August 31, 2023 at 11:22 AM Hello Heidi oh I agree. I just love the sunsets. Hugs. /Darlene/ Heidi Sands August 30, 2023 at 12:04 PM I enjoy them too and they are very nice at the water with the reflections! Thank you for your comment Darlene . Hugs :)

Paula Goldsmith August 30, 2023 at 10:59 AM A lovely story. Sunset is a pretty time of the day. Have a wonderful day............... Heidi Sands August 30, 2023 at 11:13 AM Thank you Paula. I hope you have a nice day too :)

Vijay Pandit August 30, 2023 at 9:54 AM That moment when the sun is about to dip is adorned in colors--inviting joyous emotions to celebrate nature's gift. Lovely theme my friend--lovely poem, Heidi. Heidi Sands August 30, 2023 at 11:12 AM Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate your input and support, always :)