Light A Flame

Hue’d flame,
has orange glow,
creates molten ambience,
on a rippling pulse deep sigh spot,
two heartthrobs dissolve, ah!

“Light source,”
with red weave spell,
beaming hugs, kisses, passion,
in intimate charmed close quarter,
where blue moon pledge we seal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 4:25 AM
You wrote very well. I think she wanted one verse only. Wish I had seen this earlier to tell you that 👍🔥check out the emojis
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July 30, 2026 at 9:00 AM
This is a fantastic poem about the intense and passionate connection between two individuals, illuminated by the glowing light and magical ambiance of a warm, intimate setting, Howard. The imagery created through terms like "hue’d flame" and "molten ambience" wonderfully conveys a sense of warmth and intimacy.
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 6:50 AM
Howard, I like that one. Sounds romantic. Thank you for sharing. Way to go. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 7:22 AM
Thank you, Sara, for your kind reflection on this work. Delighted you liked it. Howard
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