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She was innate with a light that not one could deny, unending grin on her face and a twinkle in her eye. A picturesque spirit, full of laughter and joy, beloved, endearing - her shine could not be destroyed. Though time had elapsed and the light, it did dim, she refused to surrender or to be chagrined. She careened every forward, through each tribulation until encountering a demon of pure manipulation. He latched on so tight she felt herself sink, soon her demon controlled the very way she could think! Her light swiftly vanished, the darkness moved in she was no longer sweet, nor genuine. The twinkle had ceased, her eyes grew black the laughter was silenced, her soul had collapsed. She lived day by day as a vacuous shell, as nobody knew the sorrow that befell. Until one eve, her demon at it's worst, there was no turning back, she was fully immersed. No longer the bright, joyful child she knew she was dark, malevolent now, completely imbued. No more could she quell or try to fight, so she picked up the gun and shut off her own light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/6/2019 10:05:00 AM
the sorry that befell... that is how many live... unnoticed... I loved your poem. Please write more. Ann
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Date: 11/4/2015 3:28:00 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup with your great first poem - I wish you luck with many more poems - A pleasure to meet you here, Lauren :) - Best wishes // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2015 3:06:00 PM
Hi Lauren, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/1/2015 2:12:00 PM
Lauren, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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