Light

lover by day,
sleeper by night.

some times I wish,
the sun wasn't so bright.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 21, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Lover by day...... wow. It's so nice to hear a voice with some vision. Mike
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April 17, 2009 at 2:30 PM
Powerful words here. You really express emotion in your words very well but it seems the soul of this writer is confined by a certain sadness. Keep your heart light my friend for you obviously have so much to offer. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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April 17, 2009 at 1:41 AM
The simplicity of this couplet speaks volumes, great job...Raul
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April 16, 2009 at 10:53 AM
mmm ... here is one to make us think ... below the surface is the soul of your tradition ... on a leaf of suggestion.
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