Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Acrostic

Lifting the Fog

Little crystals fallen angel tears smooching ground;
Instills cooling touch among grasses, buds and trees;
Facets rolling ambiguity ~ mystery;
Twirls then twines closely rush on branches bounds;
Inches white eerie cloud rhymes hang rest at key;
Nailing anyone to see natural history;
Garden fog silence~ conceals even tricks;

Tinge golden yellow linear streaks thread through
Hovering to break fogs' gloomy cold mood
Enchantment subsides, enlightening arise!

Fog succumbs ~ gradually disappears from view
Orchards' quiet green scenery renewed
Greets my cheeks breezy soft so prize...


(c)Olive Eloisa
6:29pm
July 06,2014

CONTEST NAME: 1 in 4 CHOOSE YOUR ACROSTIC TITLE
SPONSOR: ANDREA DIETRICH
8th place, to God be the glory..:)

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Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 4:42 PM Olive :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~

Casarah Nance July 18, 2014 at 10:23 PM Weee! grats on your beautiful acrostic placing in this contest, what a fabulous job girl :)

Poet Destroyer A July 18, 2014 at 2:29 PM Olive, lovely win..PD Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 18, 2014 at 7:33 PM thank you PD.. :)

Faye Gibson July 18, 2014 at 9:11 AM I love your happy way of writing, Olive. Congratulations. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 18, 2014 at 7:32 PM Thank you so much Faye.. :)

Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2014 at 9:02 AM This has a hopeful feel, congrats on your win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 18, 2014 at 7:32 PM Thank you so much Richard.. :)

Arlene Smith July 18, 2014 at 7:02 AM Love the mood of your poetry, sweet Olive.. Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 18, 2014 at 7:31 PM Thank you so much Arlene.. :) hugs my friend.. :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 18, 2014 at 1:10 AM Very wonderful Olive! U hv come up wid a great one,, congrats on win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 18, 2014 at 7:29 PM Thank Dr. Upma.. :) I am also happy reading yours,. and am really sorry that I can't read and comment as much for I am too busy with some things.

Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2014 at 11:47 PM Olive, the language and imagery are so beautiful in this poem. It was for some of the phrases sounding a bit odd to me that I did not mark it higher. but I am so glad to see you on my winners' list. You have a very poetic soul. Congratulations in my contest. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 18, 2014 at 7:28 PM Thank you Andrea for placing me :) I think I know which phrases are they.. :D but anyhow it is I am really glad to have a place in your contest.. :)

Faye Gibson July 8, 2014 at 6:24 PM Very lovely, Olive...I am sure this will do well. Best wishes. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2014 at 4:04 AM Thank you Faye...:)

Paul Callus July 7, 2014 at 3:46 PM I don't mind fog, the way you talk about it with mystery! But when it lifts you make nature look so much more beautiful. Lovely poem that ought to do well in contest. // paul Paul Callus July 18, 2014 at 6:09 AM Congratulations Olive_eloi! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 7, 2014 at 7:40 PM :) i don;t know Paul,, :) well im just enjoying making one :D

Tim Smith July 6, 2014 at 10:55 AM The mystery then the serene...wonderful Olive...hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 7, 2014 at 5:32 AM Thank You Tim for the wonderful comment .. :)