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Lifting the Fog

Little crystals fallen angel tears smooching ground; Instills cooling touch among grasses, buds and trees; Facets rolling ambiguity ~ mystery; Twirls then twines closely rush on branches bounds; Inches white eerie cloud rhymes hang rest at key; Nailing anyone to see natural history; Garden fog silence~ conceals even tricks; Tinge golden yellow linear streaks thread through Hovering to break fogs' gloomy cold mood Enchantment subsides, enlightening arise! Fog succumbs ~ gradually disappears from view Orchards' quiet green scenery renewed Greets my cheeks breezy soft so prize... (c)Olive Eloisa 6:29pm July 06,2014 CONTEST NAME: 1 in 4 CHOOSE YOUR ACROSTIC TITLE SPONSOR: ANDREA DIETRICH 8th place, to God be the glory..:)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 4:42:00 PM

Olive :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/18/2014 10:23:00 PM

Weee! grats on your beautiful acrostic placing in this contest, what a fabulous job girl :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2014 2:29:00 PM

Olive, lovely win..PD

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/18/2014 7:33:00 PM

thank you PD.. :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/18/2014 9:11:00 AM

I love your happy way of writing, Olive. Congratulations.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/18/2014 7:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Faye.. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/18/2014 9:02:00 AM

This has a hopeful feel, congrats on your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/18/2014 7:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Richard.. :)

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/18/2014 7:02:00 AM

Love the mood of your poetry, sweet Olive.. Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/18/2014 7:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Arlene.. :) hugs my friend.. :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/18/2014 1:10:00 AM

Very wonderful Olive! U hv come up wid a great one,, congrats on win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/18/2014 7:29:00 PM

Thank Dr. Upma.. :) I am also happy reading yours,. and am really sorry that I can't read and comment as much for I am too busy with some things.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2014 11:47:00 PM

Olive, the language and imagery are so beautiful in this poem. It was for some of the phrases sounding a bit odd to me that I did not mark it higher. but I am so glad to see you on my winners' list. You have a very poetic soul. Congratulations in my contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/18/2014 7:28:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for placing me :) I think I know which phrases are they.. :D but anyhow it is I am really glad to have a place in your contest.. :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/8/2014 6:24:00 PM

Very lovely, Olive...I am sure this will do well. Best wishes.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2014 4:04:00 AM

Thank you Faye...:)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/7/2014 3:46:00 PM

I don't mind fog, the way you talk about it with mystery! But when it lifts you make nature look so much more beautiful. Lovely poem that ought to do well in contest. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 7/18/2014 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/7/2014 7:40:00 PM

:) i don;t know Paul,, :) well im just enjoying making one :D

Tim Smith

Date: 7/6/2014 10:55:00 AM

The mystery then the serene...wonderful Olive...hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/7/2014 5:32:00 AM

Thank You Tim for the wonderful comment .. :)