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Lifting the Fog

Lord,I am lost
I have wandered
Far from 
The righteous path
Into the mists of desire
Never thinking of consequences
Grabbing at the easy rungs of life

Trouble has become a companion
Here now I pledge,no more
Enter my life,I pray

For
Only you can show the way
Grace me with your light



7/3/2014
For contest:1-4 Acrostic
Sponsored by:Andrea Deitrich

Copyright © Greg Hoffman | Year Posted 2014

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/29/2014 6:38:00 PM Greg, a true deep scenario .... Congratulations, on your wonderful win. Always~ LINDA Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 7/18/2014 8:47:00 PM Glad you place with this great poem :) well done. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/18/2014 2:30:00 PM Congratulations, Greg.. PD Login to Reply

Faye Gibson Date: 7/18/2014 8:51:00 AM I love that you put such a wonderful testimony in an acrostic poem. Thanks! Congratulations on your placement. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/18/2014 8:39:00 AM I can think of no better way to lift the fog. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Arlene Smith Date: 7/18/2014 6:45:00 AM Amen! He can truly lift the fog my friend! Congrats on a great win. Hugs.. Arlene Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/18/2014 12:50:00 AM Greg this is the best one I hv read so far,, we all need HIS blessings n light always! Congrats on win! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/17/2014 11:31:00 PM Greg, you chose a wonderful way to show the theme of "Lifting the Fog" with this spiritual poem. If it had been punctuated, I'd have put it in the top three! Congratulations. Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 7/18/2014 7:41:00 AM Thank you Andrea for your comments and your choice of titles for this contest.My Achilles heel has always been punctuation,never did get a handle on it.Thanks again

Cherl Dunn Date: 7/5/2014 8:29:00 AM This is a spiritual write, love it's uplifting feel and the message you've share with us, faith can be a very positive motivator is a wonderious write. cheri Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 7/3/2014 8:38:00 PM Cool :) I like your acrostic, good job :) acrostic's are one of my favorite forms of poetry I've learned because of this website. such fun to read :) Login to Reply