Greg Hoffman Poet Acrostic

Lifting the Fog

Lord,I am lost
I have wandered
Far from 
The righteous path
Into the mists of desire
Never thinking of consequences
Grabbing at the easy rungs of life

Trouble has become a companion
Here now I pledge,no more
Enter my life,I pray

For
Only you can show the way
Grace me with your light



7/3/2014
For contest:1-4 Acrostic
Sponsored by:Andrea Deitrich

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Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 6:38 PM Greg, a true deep scenario .... Congratulations, on your wonderful win. Always~ LINDA

Casarah Nance July 18, 2014 at 8:47 PM Glad you place with this great poem :) well done.

Poet Destroyer A July 18, 2014 at 2:30 PM Congratulations, Greg.. PD

Faye Gibson July 18, 2014 at 8:51 AM I love that you put such a wonderful testimony in an acrostic poem. Thanks! Congratulations on your placement.

Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2014 at 8:39 AM I can think of no better way to lift the fog. Congrats on your win.

Arlene Smith July 18, 2014 at 6:45 AM Amen! He can truly lift the fog my friend! Congrats on a great win. Hugs.. Arlene

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 18, 2014 at 12:50 AM Greg this is the best one I hv read so far,, we all need HIS blessings n light always! Congrats on win!

Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2014 at 11:31 PM Greg, you chose a wonderful way to show the theme of "Lifting the Fog" with this spiritual poem. If it had been punctuated, I'd have put it in the top three! Congratulations. Greg Hoffman July 18, 2014 at 7:41 AM Thank you Andrea for your comments and your choice of titles for this contest.My Achilles heel has always been punctuation,never did get a handle on it.Thanks again

Cherl Dunn July 5, 2014 at 8:29 AM This is a spiritual write, love it's uplifting feel and the message you've share with us, faith can be a very positive motivator is a wonderious write. cheri

Casarah Nance July 3, 2014 at 8:38 PM Cool :) I like your acrostic, good job :) acrostic's are one of my favorite forms of poetry I've learned because of this website. such fun to read :)