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Lifting My Mood

In a bit of a funk I sat down and thunk Of a means to elicit a smile, ‘Til the old thinking cap Sent a flash that said, “Tap!” Which I haven’t performed in a while. So I dug out my shoes And wood board that I use, Found a video there on the screen, Then I followed the steps Which the teacher first preps ‘Til at last I could do the routine. With the music at last, Just a wee bit too fast, I was able to tap out the dance And it lifted my mood Though my efforts, if viewed, Would cause looks I’d describe as askance.

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Date: 12/12/2024 8:11:00 PM
Music elevates my mood. Maybe I'll try dance. It seems to make you happy. Keep it up.
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Date: 12/12/2024 3:09:00 AM
Love this poem and love the humour ilene!! Dancing, happy music or just being a bit silly can get you out of a flunk for sure!! Debx
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Date: 12/11/2024 4:26:00 PM
Fun poem
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Date: 12/11/2024 3:45:00 PM
i learnt dancing many years ago, smiles, now all forgotten, your poem is so lovely and realistic, enjoyed
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Date: 12/11/2024 3:32:00 PM
I absolutely LOVE the opening lines with "funk and thunk!" Haven't seen or heard either of those words used in years. The entire poem/dance routine is definitely spirit-lifting stuff. Super well-done Ilene:)
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Date: 12/11/2024 2:42:00 PM
Gave me a grin, Ilene… not so much at the idea of your surreptitious tap routine, but because if I tried that I’d end up head first in the Christmas tree ;-)
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Date: 12/11/2024 11:59:00 AM
It certainly lifts the spirits to sing and dance Ilene I can picture you so clearly in my minds eye, sounds like you had fun! hugs jan xx
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