Lifting My Mood

In a bit of a funk 
I sat down and thunk
Of a means to elicit a smile,
‘Til the old thinking cap 
Sent a flash that said, “Tap!”
Which I haven’t performed in a while.

So I dug out my shoes
And wood board that I use,
Found a video there on the screen,
Then I followed the steps
Which the teacher first preps
‘Til at last I could do the routine.

With the music at last,
Just a wee bit too fast,
I was able to tap out the dance
And it lifted my mood
Though my efforts, if viewed,
Would cause looks I’d describe as askance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 8:11 PM
Music elevates my mood. Maybe I'll try dance. It seems to make you happy. Keep it up.
M  Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 3:09 AM
Love this poem and love the humour ilene!! Dancing, happy music or just being a bit silly can get you out of a flunk for sure!! Debx
Borke Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 4:26 PM
Fun poem
Rolland Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 3:45 PM
i learnt dancing many years ago, smiles, now all forgotten, your poem is so lovely and realistic, enjoyed
Martin Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 3:32 PM
I absolutely LOVE the opening lines with "funk and thunk!" Haven't seen or heard either of those words used in years. The entire poem/dance routine is definitely spirit-lifting stuff. Super well-done Ilene:)
Flood Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 2:42 PM
Gave me a grin, Ilene… not so much at the idea of your surreptitious tap routine, but because if I tried that I’d end up head first in the Christmas tree ;-)
Allison Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 11:59 AM
It certainly lifts the spirits to sing and dance Ilene I can picture you so clearly in my minds eye, sounds like you had fun! hugs jan xx
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