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Lifting Love

A poem for couples who are apart often. 8 Syllables. Your deep love wraps around my heart A blanket that comforts a start To begin the day with a kiss That lasts through each moment I miss I wait to give you all I can Through the hours, I wonder when We will return to our embrace And look into each other’s face Irreplaceable times ignite The flame that carries our own flight I will always be here for you To catch you from any fall too When you may feel too weak to fly, I’ll lift you with the reasons why And in these times you are away Carry these words I have to say… My love is here for you each day Heidi Sands 7/6/21

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2021 12:56:00 PM

What a lovely write. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day writing away................

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/19/2021 2:27:00 PM

Thank you Paula. I haven't had the chance yet to finish a poem I was working on today. Hopefully soon. I appreciate your kind comment on this :)

Milton Robertson

Date: 7/16/2021 2:13:00 PM

Love the rhythm, love the flow, all aglow.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2021 2:45:00 PM

That is great to hear. Thank you for your kind comments Milton :)

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/16/2021 11:52:00 AM

Congratulations, and excellent post, Heidi. I love the flow of the words, the rhyming pattern, and the impact of the message. I am very proud of you. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme of "Lifting Love," stands out, and the tone moves the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, and God's richest grace and blessings to you always. –Professor, Ambassador, Dr. Joseph S. Spence Sr. (Epulaeryu Master)!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2021 2:44:00 PM

Thank you very much for your kind comments. Much appreciated :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/16/2021 10:38:00 AM

What a lovely piece of real true love expressed with assurance and certainty Heidi, with nice rhyme and flow with good imagery throughout. Hope all is well, blessings,Gordon

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/16/2021 2:43:00 PM

Thank you very much. All is well and I hope the same for you Gordon :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/11/2021 6:31:00 AM

What can be more re-assuring than for a partner to know that, 'My love is here for you each day'. Lovely Heidi well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/11/2021 7:04:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer. I appreciate your kind comments, always. Have a nice day. Hugs :)