Lifted

( LIFTED )

Today your spirit it came and lifted
A huge burden from my shoulders you shifted
Pulling me out from this dark deep hole
Making me feel like I have more control
To me the relief is so immense
My life now makes much more sense
I knew you would come to take it away
I just had to be patient until this day
I knew you would come to make it alright
You have given me insight into my life
With this burden lifted I no longer have to fight
My mum my saviour my guiding light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 8:48 AM
A beautifully written poem. Very touching.
Cruz Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 6:34 AM
Thank you Maurice. Have a nice day
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