Lifted

A spirit  lifted
above primordial soup
awaits his new life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Winter Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 5:45 AM
I must agree with Karen - a very feel good read. Hopeful and inspirational. Thanks Mac - you are way too kind to me in your comments Hope you are feeling good. Enjoy your Sunday. Hug, shar xoxo
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 4:57 AM
Interesting thoughts in this one. Could it be a view on Raul's new picture. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 9:42 PM
Nice Haiku .. for the contest? good luck if it is.. a nice read Mac.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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