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Lift Or Left Off

my feet are on the floor as the plane rolls down the run way and at some point a feeling of giving way let's me lift off of the ground now i'm looking down on clouds

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Date: 2/25/2020 8:23:00 AM
I’m curious, what is the difference between a naturally and unnaturally enlarged prostate? Now back to the poem. I hate flying but I love that feeling of anticipation that accompanies it.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 2/25/2020 6:03:00 PM
Lol nothing Richard. It's just my prostrate has aleays been thus way; so if I would get an exam and they would say my prostrate was enlarged I wouldn't be alarmed.
Date: 2/19/2020 7:33:00 AM
Haven't been on a plane in years, but I love that feeling. Your poem brought me back. xomo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/19/2020 9:42:00 AM
Always the window seat! Thank you my friend, xomo
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 2/19/2020 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Maureen. Yes that feeling is wonderful!!!!!!! I always used to get a windo seat to also see, but now my son loves the window; plus I have a naturally enlarged prostate; so oops lol you know what I mean lol. Thank you so much Maureen for reading and commenting. In Colombia I found mi Musa. On poetry soup I found a friend. ABRAZOS

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