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open the air lock into outer space but wait in my weight less state more like floating in a water less ocean looking blindly for a knife to cut the cord from the mother ship

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Date: 8/23/2019 12:40:00 PM
One can read as deep as one dares into this one. I like it.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/24/2019 10:37:00 PM
I dareth ye young lady lol.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/24/2019 9:26:00 AM
Do dare. x
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/23/2019 10:35:00 PM
Thank you Maureen. I had to reread it after I posted it. I haven't been doing any regression therapy; so I'm daring the depths of my own waters.

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