Life's Whirl Wind

Student loans and disconnection notices. Children’s necessities and the fun things. Life is a whirl wind that keeps going.
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Diseases that take over your body and working for uncle Sam, nothing seems fair in the end. Life is a whirl wind that keeps going.
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Fighting and arguing isn’t worth it only makes problems bigger then they need to be. With so many questions and few answers Life is a whirl wind that keeps going.
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Someday I will understand everything I need to know about the world around me as life becomes another stop on my journey home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Eastman Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Life is always unexpected and busy and keeps us alert. I couldn't have said it better. You tied so much together beautifully.
Eastman Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 7:46 AM
Great wording for a great philosophical poem. Well done!
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July 13, 2011 at 2:42 PM
its not all bad and not all good cory but life is all precious and every day to be a new challenge to conquer among all that is thrown our way luv.. u have mentioned several biggies in this piece.. good expressions my friend..luv..
Muzzey Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 10:13 AM
A wonderful write Cory! I enjoyed the read with the last line saying it all, love it~ Caryl
Onclaud Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 8:12 AM
life's wheels keep on churning, cory... a great expo of wonderful nuances; wonderfully done!..:) huggs, nette
Deane Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Morning cory, got your message, this poem speaks many volumes to me, thank you for sharing...life is a continuous whirl wind for me...luv shannon
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 6:14 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with us Cory. I have enjoyed reading your fascinating writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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