Kash Poet Poet Triolet

Life's Unsolved Equation

Two and two not always make four
she realized it few moments ago
still trying to solve to be sure,
two and two not always make four;
life's equation never puzzled her more
hard decision to take...should she stay or go?
Two and two not always make four
she realized it few moments ago.





© 2011 kashinath karmakar(9th August 2011)
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Placement:5th;(August:2011)

By:kashinath karmakar

Contest:In The Afterglow(Photo based)

Sponsor:Nette Onclaud

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 15, 2011 at 3:49 PM thankxx Kash for your uplifting comments and sweet remarks on my poetry.. wishing u all the best in all contests.. luv..

Jack Horne August 15, 2011 at 2:23 PM Many congratulations on all your wins, Kash : )

Carol Sunshine Brown August 15, 2011 at 10:39 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud August 15, 2011 at 6:54 AM kashi buddy.. congrats; am so impressed... go and paint me a beautiful shadorma; looking forward! :) huggs, nette

Nancy Jones August 14, 2011 at 8:45 PM oh, my! WONderful!!! Way to go, Kashinath!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 14, 2011 at 8:35 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,kashinath

Debbie Guzzi August 14, 2011 at 7:52 PM what does 2 and 2 make? thought provoking! congrad's light & love

John Freeman August 14, 2011 at 5:37 PM Kashinath, Great to see your poem doing well in Nette's contest. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2011 at 4:28 PM Congrats Kash on your taking fifth place win in Nette's contest with this exquisite entry my friend.. luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 12, 2011 at 5:37 PM mysterious and suspenseful Kash as the decision is pending luv.. good entry for this contest..good luck my friend...luv..

Sara Kendrick August 11, 2011 at 12:48 PM Good work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2011 at 12:41 PM Thank you for posting your excellent poetry that we all may enjoy reading it Kashinath. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire August 10, 2011 at 7:04 AM Cool, unique use of the form and a thought-provoking write, Kash. Bravo! Check your Soup mail in a minute. Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 10, 2011 at 2:26 AM Ah. Quite the conundrum indeed! Life sure doesn't make sense sometimes, and yup the nagging question of whether to stay or go-- really liked your take on the photo, Kash! :)

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 10, 2011 at 12:22 AM Nice triolet Kashinath....Best of luck in the contest!!!!!!!!!!

Andrea Dietrich August 9, 2011 at 11:28 PM A puzzling one, but I LIKE it. Great way to do triolet, Kash. Best of luck in the contest, my friend.

Elizabeth Wesley August 9, 2011 at 10:29 PM I think it's three and one that makes four. You are right, two and two makes trouble. Had to stop by and see what you aare up to. Great write Kash.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 9, 2011 at 4:39 PM Nice read on the picture with humor and wit, kashinath