Life's troughs

no more time
to shed
tears

no more lies
to feel
truth

no reason
to be
nice

nothing left
to fear
loss

no vision
to see
God
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Evangeline Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 6:10 AM
Your writings are like a needle. Punctures deep using minimal words Great work
mysore Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 3:29 AM
Thank you dear poet for your kind visit. Pleased to meet you. I am glad you liked this poem, your appreciative words helps me a lot dear friend. Thank you very much. Cheers & blessings.
Crandall Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 6:36 AM
a profound work - congratulations Thriveni!
mysore Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 7:23 PM
at last you agree I work! lol. Thank you dear friend for your visit and for the joyful words. Blessings.
Junaid Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 5:35 AM
Such a unique form. I liked this poem very much, thriveni.
mysore Avatar
February 11, 2025 at 7:21 PM
Oh! I am grateful to you for this pleasant visit dear poet. Thank you for your kind words, means so much to me. Thank you.
Canerdy Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 3:51 PM
Deep thoughts are conveyed in your well-written poem, Thriveni. Janice
mysore Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 7:52 PM
New form I learnt recently dear friend. Thank you for your kind appreciation and visit dear poet. Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 10:49 PM
I really like what you did with this little poetry form
mysore Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 7:51 PM
I am grateful to you for your kind thoughts dear poet. Means so much to me. Thank you very much. Made my day...
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