Life's Train

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Seen through child like eyes I looked up discovering New Train that life showed. * Inspired by: Mystic Rose

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2016 3:09:00 PM

Life can take different shapes and hues according to our perspectives. Those who have children, and better still grandchildren, realize that there is more to life than what is usually taken for granted. ~ Regards // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 4/7/2016 12:18:00 AM

Discovering new train- this is wonderful. Love Iris.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/7/2016 8:17:00 AM

Train of thought also.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/14/2016 12:52:00 PM

To a child everything is new, and everything is an opportunity. A good mentality to have. Interesting format for your haiku, with the single-syllable third line.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/14/2016 5:54:00 PM

Timothy I tried and found new fun. Thanks my friend.