Life's Train

Seen through child like eyes

I looked up discovering

New

Train that life showed.

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Inspired by: Mystic Rose

encouraginglifeplacesselfhaiku

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Paul Callus

April 14, 2016 at 3:09 PM

Life can take different shapes and hues according to our perspectives. Those who have children, and better still grandchildren, realize that there is more to life than what is usually taken for granted. ~ Regards // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

April 7, 2016 at 12:18 AM

Discovering new train- this is wonderful. Love Iris.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

April 7, 2016 at 8:17 AM

Train of thought also.

Timothy Hicks

March 14, 2016 at 12:52 PM

To a child everything is new, and everything is an opportunity. A good mentality to have. Interesting format for your haiku, with the single-syllable third line.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

March 14, 2016 at 5:54 PM

Timothy I tried and found new fun. Thanks my friend.

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