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Life's Tides

Balmy sands of time Buffered by briny bliss sublime Cleansing tides filter malleable mind Winds of change scour and grind Revitalizing beams warm chafed strand Enervating force; life's trials to withstand Buffeting storms blow; the landscape rearranges Eroding dreams; our outlook changes Alternate channels evolve our hopes to renew Rivulets sprout new paths to hew Stagnant pools form; our resolve stagnates Refreshing rains arrive; uncertainty abates Silty streams flow back into the billowy sea Purging life's dross; setting our soul free

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Date: 3/21/2011 9:25:00 AM
Stephen, I really like the way you use the sea, channels and pools to describe the way we approach life. When one dream fails, we must find another. There is always uncertainty in life, but there are periods of renewal (like the refreshing rains) that help us set new goals. Keen insight! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/21/2011 9:14:00 AM
Yes, we must embrace those alternate channels. This piece really did flow...fantastic work!
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