Life's Song


Notes lost in discord
Melodies still born
Silence and decay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Austin Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 1:46 PM
Could be an elegy for all the mindless deaths in the middle east. Could be Mozart, dead at such an early age. Congrats. daver
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 5:40 PM
Congrats on having your poem featured on the home page Shane - hope your days are brighter since writing this deep sad poem:-) hugs jan xx
Cooper Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Hi Jan, Thanks, my days are much better now due to my wonderful friends in no small part. Take care Love Shane xxx
A  Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 5:57 PM
WOW..
Cooper Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 5:51 PM
Grazie!
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 6:04 AM
- Touching lines, my friend Shane - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cooper Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 2:40 AM
Hello dear Anne-Lise, thank you for stopping by. Hope you are well. Love Shane xxx
Nunez Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Such poignancy in this write, Shane. Excellent turn in 2nd line which could mean at least two things. Glad to see your new post. Hope you're keeping well. hugs!
Cooper Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Hi Kim, I am glad you liked my poem I am well, thank you for the thought, and hope you are also
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 5:44 PM
such deep sad imagery Shane so lovely to see you posting again - we have Mary and Mike back this indeed is a happy day to see you back here too:-) hugs Jan xx
Cooper Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Hello Ninja NAJ, I am glad that you were first to comment on my new write. It is just like old times. Hope you are well and i am glad to be back amongst my dear friends again. Thanks for stopping in. love Shane xxx
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