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"Free Verse Rhyme" As we lose serpent protrusion(carnality) The mind’s illusion................................................................................c. II Thes. 10-12 By God’s allegoric proprietary, ` Hath love alluded unto that which protruded Even as mind `hath bequeathed The entry into shadow of death Now through the renewing of the mind `Doth recede the time line For to cure all natural ills As into new body we fill From the very vile, we file Into innocent child So very meek and mile `Tis a holy child Thus into unity we file To fill Love’s child Thus leaving the vile Mind of a child Not so mild “Wild child” For `tis God’s call Humanity climb this wall The wild’s call `Tis the wall Leaving the vile behind As we develop Love’s kind For `tis by Love’s nature We win life’s wager For as the mind leads Parasitic greed, has needs And `tis always the heart That mind bleeds 10-24-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Date: 1/15/2023 9:30:00 PM
yes as like before added comment and after reading this poem I want to say; this is full gist of spirituality; nice to read the rhyming~MB
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Date: 12/29/2009 7:34:00 PM
Wow! Another exceptional spiritually uplifting piece you have penned Moses...so much truth you have conveyed here! Poignant!! Thanks so much for sharing and for your always taking the time to read my poetry. Much thanks too for your kind words of encouragement and empathy...all is truly appreciated! Have a glorious night! ~Mary
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Date: 11/20/2009 4:20:00 AM
Wonderful rhyming poem and full of spiritual stimulation, as always! Love to you, Moses. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/11/2009 12:57:00 PM
Im not sure what this poem is about but I enjoyed reading it
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Date: 11/7/2009 3:25:00 AM
All I can say is wow! Excellent write, you are really show casing your talent with this write. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 11/6/2009 6:58:00 PM
Great job! I really like this one! Deb
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Date: 11/6/2009 11:15:00 AM
=) i love this. nice job xo Raiin
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Date: 11/3/2009 9:59:00 AM
U, have male. ;)
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Date: 11/2/2009 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, at the end of the day, we follow two different paths, heading for the same destination! love Simone
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:58:00 AM
Thus leaving the vile Mind of a child Not so mild “Wild child” Whoooo Moses... EXCELLENT ! ... Bringing Home The Message - Loving It ... Poet-Pal, MoonBee
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Date: 11/1/2009 11:07:00 AM
For this reader, nobody can come close to you in bringing the spiritual message home, Moses. Brilliant work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/30/2009 10:08:00 AM
Everything we do in life is about choise of thought, up down, left right, the right way, the wrong way, if only we all chose the right way of thinking! love Simone
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Date: 10/28/2009 7:04:00 AM
LOVE IT! ;)
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Date: 10/27/2009 6:14:00 AM
great closer Moses, tis always the heart that mind bleeds. At least the heart cannot be fully bled, I would have done that a long time ago if it could. Instead I keep hovering back and forth, greedy need vs absolute truth, and I end up confused same as I always was.
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Date: 10/26/2009 11:22:00 AM
Basking in the cleansing words. Nice very nice.
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Date: 10/25/2009 3:15:00 PM
wow John! enjoyed the "cleansing" very nice! and thanks always for your support!... jim
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Date: 10/25/2009 1:53:00 PM
Great effort of writing to inspire the necessity and worthiness of fighting and winning the battle within to follow the right path, overcoming temptation. Thanks for sharing. Love, your poet friend, Caroline.
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Date: 10/25/2009 12:01:00 PM
Tis a beautiful day here in my life. I am enjoying reading the poetry of my wonderful poet friends here at the Soup. Thank you John. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2009 11:57:00 AM
Dear Moses, YOU have such a clear vision of LIFE after we leave our bodies and enter the body of Christ Awesome POETIC love for the Lord Always...HG SOUP MAIL CALL
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Date: 10/24/2009 2:20:00 PM
I especially like the third stanza, John. I'll have a new body Praise the Lord I'll have a new life. In his likeness I'll be glad there will be no more pain and no more strife. Thanks for reminding me. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/24/2009 12:41:00 PM
Emphatic poem ... dramatic message.. makes one start prioritizing... thankxxx for comments on my Smoothie poem.. I like to think I am a Smoothie for the Lord's work.. the more I write about HIM ... the more I am free... Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/24/2009 10:24:00 AM
Haven't seen your name in a while.... Needed the "Moses" type inspiration... I liked this write a lot dear friend.... Awesome write John......:JP}
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Date: 10/24/2009 10:02:00 AM
Great stuff, Moses! The last two lines say it all my friend...(You godda' dem Soup mail tooo) Tim
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