Life's Joy and Pain

In Life that runs
has Lamp that burns
its light not seen
its heat felt keen

a heat when warm
makes Life a charm
a feel so sweet
mind loves to meet

I seek  this more
my sprits go soar
joy soon to end 
out goes warm friend

a knot of pain
takes root to strain
I hate this state
I call this fate

Lamp is in flame
I pass the blame
why me to task
why me I ask

for long this was
for now it is
Time heals my pain
my mind turn sane

Joy and pain twin
teach how to win
they don’t come free
makes Life its fee

both come and sit 
means Lamp is lit
Twin leaves its clout
when Lamp burns out.


03-Feb-2018
Contest: 128 words
4 words per line all 1 syllable each.  So 4 syllables per line.32 line poem, so in total 128 words.
Sponsored by: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Sathya - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
Babu Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Thanks a Lot Gregory for the visit and your Blessings. Regards,Sathya
Ashley Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Congratulations Sathya on your wonderful win with your lovely and meaningful poem. ~Susan
Babu Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Thank You so much Susan. Thanks for the visit :-) Regards,Sathya
Pinet Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Your words are filled with imagery. The simplest words say a lot and convey meaning within their reading. The delivery and the flow smoothly carrying a thought to completion within its structure. Perfect! Emile.
Babu Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Thank you so much Emile. Regards,Sathya
Roper Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations on your win,Sathya!
Babu Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 11:31 AM
Thanks a Lot Eve
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February 5, 2018 at 12:44 AM
Congratulations on your great win.
Babu Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Thanks a Lot Subimal Regards, Sathya
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February 4, 2018 at 5:13 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Sathya.
Babu Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 7:43 AM
Thanks a lot Line......Regards,S athya
One Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Great take on the contest Sathya.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Babu Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 7:43 AM
Thanks a Lot SO. I enjoyed participating in this contest.....
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