Life's Joy and Pain

In Life that runs
has Lamp that burns
its light not seen
its heat felt keen

a heat when warm
makes Life a charm
a feel so sweet
mind loves to meet

I seek  this more
my sprits go soar
joy soon to end 
out goes warm friend

a knot of pain
takes root to strain
I hate this state
I call this fate

Lamp is in flame
I pass the blame
why me to task
why me I ask

for long this was
for now it is
Time heals my pain
my mind turn sane

Joy and pain twin
teach how to win
they don’t come free
makes Life its fee

both come and sit 
means Lamp is lit
Twin leaves its clout
when Lamp burns out.


03-Feb-2018
Contest: 128 words
4 words per line all 1 syllable each.  So 4 syllables per line.32 line poem, so in total 128 words.
Sponsored by: Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/15/2018 10:39:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Sathya - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/16/2018 7:45:00 AM
Thanks a Lot Gregory for the visit and your Blessings. Regards,Sathya
Date: 2/6/2018 7:38:00 PM
Congratulations Sathya on your wonderful win with your lovely and meaningful poem. ~Susan
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Date: 2/7/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thank You so much Susan. Thanks for the visit :-) Regards,Sathya
Date: 2/5/2018 12:57:00 PM
Your words are filled with imagery. The simplest words say a lot and convey meaning within their reading. The delivery and the flow smoothly carrying a thought to completion within its structure. Perfect! Emile.
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Emile. Regards,Sathya
Date: 2/5/2018 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,Sathya!
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Sathya Babu
Date: 2/5/2018 11:31:00 AM
Thanks a Lot Eve
Date: 2/5/2018 12:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win.
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Date: 2/5/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thanks a Lot Subimal Regards, Sathya
Date: 2/4/2018 5:13:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Sathya.
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Date: 2/5/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot Line......Regards,S athya
Date: 2/4/2018 3:27:00 PM
Great take on the contest Sathya.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/5/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thanks a Lot SO. I enjoyed participating in this contest.....
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