Life's Ebb and Flow

Foamy babbling brook
A life's seamless stepping stones
Sloping slippery moss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Very deep and meaningful haiku you have penned, Stephen
Devonshire Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 11:01 AM
Great use of alliteration as well as creative imagery in your haiku, Stephen! I really like the thought of life having "seamless stepping stones." Can relate to that. Well done. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 10:53 AM
Good one for life is like that when we least expect it the slippery moss shows up..Sara
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