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Life's Ebb and Flow

Foamy babbling brook A life's seamless stepping stones Sloping slippery moss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/26/2010 12:58:00 PM
Very deep and meaningful haiku you have penned, Stephen
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Date: 11/26/2010 11:01:00 AM
Great use of alliteration as well as creative imagery in your haiku, Stephen! I really like the thought of life having "seamless stepping stones." Can relate to that. Well done. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/26/2010 10:53:00 AM
Good one for life is like that when we least expect it the slippery moss shows up..Sara
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