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Life's Confusing Messages

What do I eat The same things on repeat What to do Should I have a strew? What should I pursue What will it ensue Nothing seems to change Its all so strange I even complain Always the same The weather changes Talking to strangers Sometimes it can help Confusion I've been dealt I have an idea It's all so unfair I'll keep plugging along Maybe sing a song!

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Date: 5/7/2024 8:39:00 AM
Yes, routine can be a bit routine. This is why I'm a mass murderer on the weekends. I meet all sorts.,
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Date: 5/6/2024 7:11:00 PM
Hi Lynn. Yes, as in your last stanza "life can be unfair sometimes." This is a good poem in that it captures that reality and gives examples. But, good on you that you ended the poem in a positive note. Well done. Carol Louise
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