Life's Breath

Touch me gentle breeze,
ease the loneliness within
as I inhale life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 8, 2016 at 1:20 AM
nice to read this haiku again, Jason. linda
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August 21, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Jason, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Luv ~SKAT~
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April 25, 2011 at 11:21 AM
Jason, nice breath of fresh air... enjoyed..take care,..p.d.
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April 21, 2011 at 8:02 AM
Jason no edit , should be soft.
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April 21, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Jason great hakiu , sof and gentle. Anne.
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April 21, 2011 at 4:52 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jason. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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April 20, 2011 at 8:27 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoyed reading your creative lines tonight.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv...
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April 20, 2011 at 5:41 PM
Nice expression on life, Jason
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April 20, 2011 at 4:33 PM
very pretty way to express this thought, Jason.
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