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Lifes a Shape

Life's a journey of many shapes A square a triangle its all the same. With edges and curves nothing is what it seems. Good and bad life goes on. Never a perfect circle for long. Everyone has a different shape then before. Life's a circle that looses shape depending on whats coming your way

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Date: 7/26/2011 9:51:00 PM
An ever changing shape and a lopsided circle.For SURE, Cory. Nice one!
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Date: 7/26/2011 9:28:00 PM
Nice analogy, cory
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Date: 7/26/2011 1:23:00 PM
Hope you are having a wonderful week Cory. I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2011 11:58:00 AM
perhaps we should learn to keep it a perfect circle, as far as live at peace within. But this is a good description of reality. Thanks for sharing, and thank you for your kind comments on my poems. Caroline.
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Date: 7/26/2011 10:30:00 AM
yes cory intricate lines depicting life perfectly.. so square days ..so rectangle ones too.. and circles that keep a merry go round effect going... but each day a new day to create great poetry like this one my friend..luv..
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