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Lifeless Sand Castle

(a set of Senryu) Lifeless sand castle Speaks past hidden memories Still stands surviving tells many stories evidences its history sweet and bitter both

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/20/2017 12:55:00 PM

This is excellent, precised and highly intellectual. A huge 7 for me.

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/21/2017 1:49:00 AM

Thanks my dear friend for your nice comment and for 7. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2017 5:52:00 PM

this is very nice, BL. Good job.

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/17/2017 2:00:00 PM

Thanks my dear friend for your nice comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/16/2017 6:47:00 AM

- Many hidden memories - We build many sandcastles in life - Great written, Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/17/2017 2:00:00 PM

Thanks my dear friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl