Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

Lifeless Sand Castle

(a set of Senryu)


                                            Lifeless sand castle 
                                    Speaks past hidden memories 
                                           Still stands surviving 

                                             tells many stories
                                           evidences its history 
                                           sweet and bitter both

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Funom Makama May 20, 2017 at 12:55 PM This is excellent, precised and highly intellectual. A huge 7 for me. Bl Devnath May 21, 2017 at 1:49 AM Thanks my dear friend for your nice comment and for 7. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2017 at 5:52 PM this is very nice, BL. Good job. Bl Devnath May 17, 2017 at 2:00 PM Thanks my dear friend for your nice comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen May 16, 2017 at 6:47 AM - Many hidden memories - We build many sandcastles in life - Great written, Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath May 17, 2017 at 2:00 PM Thanks my dear friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl