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Lifeless

I feel so lifeless like a doll. With raggy hair and a body so tall. So lifeless i am no emotion to see. Only a face but noone looks at me. To them i am only a shadow that walks behind No feeling of any musical rhyme or rhme My arms could hug an entire tree. Yet no one trys to hug me. My mind is filled with so many thoughts Very soon i will be lost.

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Patrick Cornwall

Date: 3/13/2012 6:37:00 AM

fantastic poem and congrats on featured... Patrick

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/12/2012 7:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dayneissa. Love, Carol

Rosalyn Lampkin

Date: 10/29/2011 1:48:00 PM

To compare yourself to a doll. Actually, a doll brings so much joy to the hearts of so many. Wishing you the best.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/12/2010 6:43:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dayneissa. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 5/7/2010 8:31:00 AM

oh how sad I hope you can find happiness in your life best wishes to you good luck in your life and welcome to poetry soup faleshia

Not Anymore

Date: 5/7/2010 7:27:00 AM

I'm sorry, but it's nothing that hasn't been read before; It's as lifeless as you are. You might want to twist some creativity or lime or something to make it bareable. (Yes, you are now free to critique me in turn.)