Lifeless

I feel so lifeless like a doll. 
With raggy hair and a body so tall.
So lifeless i am no emotion to see. 
Only a face but noone looks at me.
To them i am only a shadow that walks behind
No feeling of any musical rhyme or rhme
My arms could hug an entire tree.
Yet no one trys to hug me.
My mind is filled with so many thoughts
Very soon i will be lost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Cornwall Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 6:37 AM
fantastic poem and congrats on featured... Patrick
Brown Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dayneissa. Love, Carol
Lampkin Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 1:48 PM
To compare yourself to a doll. Actually, a doll brings so much joy to the hearts of so many. Wishing you the best.
Brown Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 6:43 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dayneissa. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Murphy Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 8:31 AM
oh how sad I hope you can find happiness in your life best wishes to you good luck in your life and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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May 7, 2010 at 7:27 AM
I'm sorry, but it's nothing that hasn't been read before; It's as lifeless as you are. You might want to twist some creativity or lime or something to make it bareable. (Yes, you are now free to critique me in turn.)
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