Lifeforce

I never thought that one day I might be
so separate and distanced from the sea,
and grey-blue mornings offering a cloak
of cushioning velvet, where once I woke
so long ago, to watch the gannets dive
as silvered arrows from a tight-strung bow.

Those days were ever tinged with disbelief
that fate had held my hand, though all too brief,
and led me to this cherished place, where grace
and beauty did my other world replace.
It was, I know, with age now bittersweet,
the greatest gift that fortune could bestow.

In memory now I hear the ocean speak
of all its moods when, waking or asleep,
I see and hear that lifeforce long forgone.
As to its beating heart forever drawn,
I ponder on the change it wrought in me,
and things that are, and things that weren't to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 9:31 AM
It's a pleasure to find this awesome poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Peter~
Rees Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 4:15 AM
Thank you so much. I’m glad you’ve enjoyed this poem, which is a bit of a life story really, and very personal.
Shaw Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 6:00 AM
The sea is an amazing phenomenon which hold many emotions, lovely write Peter . . . ; )
Rees Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 4:17 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Indiana. Many thanks.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 11:51 PM
Peter, this wonderful poem seeped in a bit of sadness and longing for the sea is so beautifully composed. It celebrates the wonders of the sea in perfect harmony. This jewel is going into my Faves! : ) xxoo
Rees Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 6:46 AM
Thank you Connie for this kind comment. I’m pleased you enjoyed my story.
Milgate Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 4:43 PM
lovely poem I live near the Bay a mile away and love to go there and listen to the waves and seals, it is a life-force such nice rhyming also. Thank you for this lovely poem on this Sunday.
Rees Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 6:47 AM
Thank you Linda for your comment and for your empathy.
Hinshaw Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 12:06 PM
A most beautiful write, Peter! My kind of poetry! Many thanks for your kind comment re The Ocean Calls Me and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
Rees Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 12:27 PM
Thank you Bob. I guessed that you and I are on the same wavelength.
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