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Life' Woes

Standing on a mountain top My last stronghold The eyes of love Locked passionately with each other Searching for heart’s key. Down below The barren valley Tells its own story As their trees were fell It looks up to me Searching for answers In soul’s key A tide of love swells in our entwined hearts- sweeps away life's woes of illegal logging.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/4/2024 8:00:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2016 5:46:00 PM

nice too see you again

Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 2:56:00 PM

Dayak, hope to see you back this year. 2016

Emilia Lasarus

Date: 6/6/2015 12:40:00 AM

Hi there! Your poem reminds me of Samling and Shin Yang :) Anyway, glad to know that there is another Sarawakian here (besides me!)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2015 9:34:00 PM

Dayak, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 4/30/2015 1:03:00 PM

Dayak,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2015 9:32:00 AM

- Hello Dayak :) - I welcome you to P-Soup - Hope you will find much pleasure here with us :) - Share your thoughts and words - hugs // Anne-Lise :)