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Life Without You

life without t you is slow
life without you is blue 
life i cant being without you

life with out you is nothing
how did we get in this position
baby why cant we sign a love potion

we come to far to were we are now
life without you i cant even think
life without you stinks

life without you is
life without you is terrible
life without you is so painful

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/16/2016 12:56:00 AM

latika carley. Nice to read your poem today. enjoyed ~LINDA~

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/7/2008 8:23:00 AM

Dear Latika, Welcome Well I must say YOU do a great job conveying YOUR Feelings However when YOU Post a POEM look through the Forms and Read their meaning then read YOUR POEM again and decide the Form Stay away from "I do not Know" as many POETS will not even read YOUR POEM If YOU want exposure have the POEM match the Form YOUR POETRY FRIEND...HG