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Life Without Love

She paid her respects to the maven as she worshiped in a manner most graven. Her prayers were sublime, while she looked for a sign with an offering placed in a basin. Hands held to her chest as she wished to be blessed, while the leader frowned in her direction. Her thoughts pondered gloom in the cool, darkened room to strengthen her newfound connection. Impressed with her new independence, she reveled with increased persistence. Her journey became a sweetness to claim great success with a wonderful fragrance. This pleasant adventure did forcefully bring her along with its power to hasten A change to her person which tended to worsen, becoming what good people chasten. While receiving a sinister gladness, she felt something leave her with sadness. Her feelings embraced a commitment of haste to enter the place most call badness. Inner peace now departed. Her new life had faltered, succumbed to the forces of evil. Perplexities grew as she failed to see through her decision to worship the devil. Anxieties met no resistance as they penetrated deep without hindrance. So with happiness gone, she was left with no one to give her much needed assistance. She now was distraught to the point where she thought that living lacked purpose and meaning. So she took her own life with a sharp kitchen knife, which showed how depressed was her feeling. Now reader be wise, pay attention; to the life of the maiden in question. She sought to be free from her anxiety, which led to her fatal decision. Look into your heart to prepare a fresh start and focus on a brand new beginning. Know love is the cure that will help you endure a long life with a much better ending.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/9/2016 6:04:00 AM
I was looking for poems in bengali Script. I doubt if any such poem exists on this, Site administration in hving individuals registered. With what intwwrest thy know better. I have to quit. Bye.
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Date: 5/8/2016 8:52:00 PM
Gerald,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Gerald Greene
Date: 5/9/2016 6:30:00 AM
Thank you Linda. I'm interested in finding other poets who share my style. I'll post something each week, and keep my eyes open. :)
Date: 5/8/2016 2:51:00 PM
Gerald, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Gerald Greene
Date: 5/8/2016 3:47:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/8/2016 9:17:00 AM
Gerald, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Gerald Greene
Date: 5/8/2016 9:29:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 5/8/2016 6:35:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Gerald. :)
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Gerald Greene
Date: 5/8/2016 8:10:00 AM
Thank you also.

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