Life Within

My self
Dreams of solace
Forged in flames burning hot
In fields I ran through in my youth
I live



04/11/12
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Rozario Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 10:38 PM
Great stuff...enjoy this kinda deep write. BTW thanks a lot for all your nice comments...appreciated much!...goodnight & take care.
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July 6, 2012 at 8:48 PM
James, life well lived.. your imprints will always remain... I'm actually happy to be here tonight Jim.. Hopefully I find time to be myself next week or so.. You're always so kind. I also want to thank you for also understanding my growing ways here on the soup. have yourself a great night... xox~pd
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 12:49 PM
I really like this. Solace mixed with passion!
Anish Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 4:16 PM
Excellent use of this form. A lot said in just a few words. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Smalling Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 1:09 PM
If enemies burn there Then we may laugh, for thing I forgot Was that long tear I shed for the writhing moth ... When it was still The stillness solaced me. Tears are hot. Great write, Jimbo
Kendrick Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 5:57 AM
Enjoyed your memory lane..Great work..Sara
Peranteau Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Curt, yet full of vision dear poet ! And to still be where one was raised as a child must be a wonderful feeling ! Awesome write Mr. Goff ! Have a wonderful weekend sir....much love, james
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