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Life With a Twist

imagine if you're sad but you smile instead, Or if you're brain isn't inside your head! Imagine if your heart beated to the rhythm of you're favourite song, and no one can tell if you're exams are marked wrong! Imagine you are walking, but instead of walking you keep talking! Life may have a giant fist But thats life... with a twist!!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2015 4:26:00 PM

Hi Amina, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Super Star
Date: 12/21/2015 4:50:00 AM

thank you lindaxxx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/6/2015 6:34:00 PM

Hi Amina, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 12/2/2015 11:00:00 PM

What a twist, ha, Love the verse. Amina, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Super Star
Date: 12/3/2015 2:01:00 PM

thank you skat for the lovely comment i hope you comment and like my other poems